The Other Side


Don't let them open your door,
And step into your shoes,
Don’t let the dogs into your bedroom
Don’t let them onto your bed
'Cuz with the rhythmic, low rumble
the final straw shall fall
n you'd look at the ceiling
to open another door
unlock it with the ease key
with the hope of comfort and more
but there just isn't any.

16 did the drill!:

niki said...

the other side= abstract post

*still scratching head*

Wandering Minstrel said...

@niki
life's hard (currently)..looking for some solace..not finding any..hence the abstract post

yousuckprotonballs! - manthan said...

otherside is a nice song by RHCP :P

Wandering Minstrel said...

@manthan daarleeng!
yes sweetheart! but my poem is titled 'the other side' and not 'other side' :)

gadhuram! :|

Vibushan L Narayan said...

ditto Niki :D :D

HP said...

why so low.. ??

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Thoughts from the abstract mind, eh?

DMulan said...

moti!!! kya hua?? tera trash phase hai.. but so many good things are happening bachi * wink wink *
aye i lou you ya!
and its February!!!

Unknown said...

I scribble a lot of stuff when I'm low... but hardly find it worthy of being posted... yours (if it was penned during a low phase i.e.) was nice to read...

VIDYA said...

The post is evidently poignant.But I didn't quite understand it...Does it say don't let people walk all over your feelings.Once you let em in,they'll wreak havoc and you'll try to put it all in the past and open another door to the future,but you won't be able to?
If you can sort me out,I'd be glad :)

Wandering Minstrel said...

@vibhushan
ditto answer :P

Wandering Minstrel said...

@HP
long story..

Wandering Minstrel said...

@rakesh
totally!

Wandering Minstrel said...

@div
aye, i lou you too ya..ae what would i do without you ya?? love you so darn much :)

Wandering Minstrel said...

@aZoed
thanks and welcome :)

Wandering Minstrel said...

@vidya
sorry for being awfully late..things have been crazy..
you got it bang on target :)
thanks and welcome here :)