The house overlooking the sea was an object of envy for many. With many wind chimes adorning the patio, every passer by taking his evening stroll wanted to own her house. The huge expressionist painting hung on the wall. She was an art enthusiast. And loved her evening glass of red wine just as much. Her cigarette rested on the receptacle, still burning..and she looked at her reflection in the large French window..at her face and at her fingers, without a wedding ring.The same face which appeared on the cover of tens of magazines neatly laid upon the coffee table. Some eulogized her, some termed her the dragon lady, career obsessed..The same table which he had picked out for her when they had gone shopping..

The trouble with lies is; each one begets another, into a spiral conundrum, confusing and hard to get out of. The trouble with trust is; you believe each of these lies. And the trouble with ambition, she thought, was, you are left alone at the top, with no home to go back to...
But all this was already clouded in mist and merged into the boundless grey sea..the undulating sea, gleaming under the moon and then roaring against the flaring crimson..
She waited for the phone to ring..technology had always eluded her. She knew that this small device would connect her to the world. Bring her opportunities, success, money and fame. Only today, she knew, it would bring her hope..and life..
How hard could it be to say, I love you too Cecilia..
And the phone rang...
...and without waiting for the chauffeur, she drove the Benz..
Next day, the papers read.. “… head-on collision…she was two months pregnant...."
And no one would ever know who called her..
23 did the drill!:
very unlike you..but nice! :)
:.(
someone is changing her style! ki happened?
rem? those poor little rich kids? :P
good job.. liked it a lot :)
i was thinking that u'd give a humorous twist to the story..but i'm happy that u didn't..was nice! :)
ur first short story...good job girl!!
hah looks likes happiness has exponentiallly inceased youe creative quotient ...dragon lady...devil wears Prada?
dangerous...but i like
nice ji...multi-talented bachche hain yaha par! ;)
@karan
aise hee kuch naya try karne ki koshish!
happy ho to aisa tragic story kyun ??
i loved it anyway .. wonderfully written !
@karan
kuch naya try karne ki koshish..glad u liked it!
@hobo
arey no...this wasn't meant to be a sad story!! for crying all u need to do is switch on ur T.V and surf Indian channels for all kinds of crap they churn out!!
@div
tu apni diary mujhe degi nahi, to mere pass acha source nahi hoga, matlab mujhe royalty bhi nahi milegi..so thought, apna kaam swayam karte hain! :P
thanks :)
u want a humorous twist..okie..here's the ending..replace the last line with
..and she drove the benz
and the director screamed CUT!! :P
now..there's ur treat! :P
@think tank
i was hoping somebody would notice and mention it! glad u did! that one word has been doing the rounds in my head for so long..i had to use it!! and ended up crafting this whole story around it! :P
and although i generally don't like chic-flicks.. somehow i LOVED Meryl Streep!!
@tinni
damn right you are! tu khud bhi kitni talented hai! i currently have a folder in ur name in my sys..it has all the brilliant pics u've clicked! :)
so if ever u lose them, u know whom to contact for back-up! :)
@HP
yaar hirni..GRE toh tha pehla step..uske baad wale steps (univ selection etc etc) rula rahe hain :(
thaks! glad u like it! :)
I had a lump in the throat reading this."The trouble with ambition, she thought, was, you are left alone at the top, with no home to go back to." - so true.
Very well written!
The trouble with lies is; each one begets another, into a spiral conundrum, confusing and hard to get out of. The trouble with trust is; you believe each of these lies. And the trouble with ambition, she thought, was, you are left alone at the top, with no home to go back to...
brilliant brilliant brilliant!!
@sameera
wow! i didn't know i was capable of arouse such profound sentiments!! thanks!! :)
@sean
stroke of luck..kabhi kabhi hum bhi acha likh lete hain! :)
okay..so today i was reading byrons poetry which primarily talked about how its lonely at the top...once you claw your way up to the summit...its a rough world...somehow it gave me that flavour...of course, devil wears prada (dragon lady!!!!) did come through too...
i likeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
:D:D
@go-phish
i LOVED meryl streep!!
and the whole story was crafted around those 2 words..was bugging me ever since i saw the movie! and hence..tadaa..here u have the ishtoriiee!! :P
me thanks me thanks! :)
i loved the part on being at the top... and the part on trust too... brilliant work absolutely....
@swayam
thanks! :)
yay! my first short story n ppl 've liked it! :D
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