Pieces of me..













Sitting by the window of the old rickety bus,
That took you to your destination,
You had told me once, "gorgeous moon",
Today i sit by my window,
And stare at the same iridescent moon;
Only today, I'm in pieces,
One part of me wants to stay,
One part of me wants to run to you,
One part of me wants to cry,
Only today, there are no promises,
What went wrong and where,
I wish i could find all the answers,
And make you mine forever...

10 did the drill!:

niki said...

@swati- when everything is deterministic, there is not much joy...excitement is- strange mysteries of love

Anonymous said...

AWSOME!!!!!

Wandering Minstrel said...

@niki
love isn't strange or mysterious. It is our very nature. Joy is love for what is. Sorrow is love for what is not :)

peace
swati

Wandering Minstrel said...

@shil
thank you mayya :)

Chronicler said...

loved it... connected with the whole feeling that came thru..:)

Wandering Minstrel said...

@swayam
thanks :)
welcome to the blog!

Anonymous said...

moonlight sonata was your best!!
this is also nice..but not as great as moonlight sonata!!

Wandering Minstrel said...

@jenny
thanks for the blurb! :)

Anonymous said...

i agree with jenny..moonlight sonata was brilliant!
this one's good too..but that felt more from the heart :)

Wandering Minstrel said...

@sean
go marry jenny!! :P

thanks :)
peace!