Don't let them open your door,
And step into your shoes,
Don’t let the dogs into your bedroom
Don’t let them onto your bed
'Cuz with the rhythmic, low rumble
the final straw shall fall
n you'd look at the ceiling
to open another door
unlock it with the ease key
with the hope of comfort and more
but there just isn't any.
16 did the drill!:
the other side= abstract post
*still scratching head*
@niki
life's hard (currently)..looking for some solace..not finding any..hence the abstract post
otherside is a nice song by RHCP :P
@manthan daarleeng!
yes sweetheart! but my poem is titled 'the other side' and not 'other side' :)
gadhuram! :|
ditto Niki :D :D
why so low.. ??
Thoughts from the abstract mind, eh?
moti!!! kya hua?? tera trash phase hai.. but so many good things are happening bachi * wink wink *
aye i lou you ya!
and its February!!!
I scribble a lot of stuff when I'm low... but hardly find it worthy of being posted... yours (if it was penned during a low phase i.e.) was nice to read...
The post is evidently poignant.But I didn't quite understand it...Does it say don't let people walk all over your feelings.Once you let em in,they'll wreak havoc and you'll try to put it all in the past and open another door to the future,but you won't be able to?
If you can sort me out,I'd be glad :)
@vibhushan
ditto answer :P
@HP
long story..
@rakesh
totally!
@div
aye, i lou you too ya..ae what would i do without you ya?? love you so darn much :)
@aZoed
thanks and welcome :)
@vidya
sorry for being awfully late..things have been crazy..
you got it bang on target :)
thanks and welcome here :)
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